Monday, June 14, 2010

I do...yes I do...

Let me say it now
can't hold it in forever
when you are not around
I feel a strange fever
I need u near...yes I do...

what is mine is thine
you needn't have to say that
I don't mind
in health and sickness
I like to be with you..yes I do

I can't celebrate
our love and commitment
because I'm just beginning to imagine
my life's whole expanse without u
I think it is meaningless...yes I do

In this life and the lives to come
togetherness will be fun
I assure you..I will be there for you
I don't mind..if you don't say the same
I assure you..I will be there for you...yes I do!

by Bala :)

15 comments:

Unknown said...

nice innovative thought.. great going...

varsha said...

Bala,

Fantabulous.... I loved the last stanza a lot :)

So nicely phrased... lovely!!

Great. Keep rocking!!

Raj said...

Machi super da...

Unknown said...

very nicely written... in a simple way, reminds any1 how true it is when u miss some1 .. kalaku ...

மதுரக்காரி said...

I feel a strange fever
I need u near...yes I do...///

Nice... :)
உன்னை பிரிந்து போகையிலே
உள்ளம் எரிந்து போகிறதே....

Unknown said...

Realy nice thought..

I liked IT..

itzkanna4u said...

I assure you..I will be there for you..
I don't mind..if you don't say the same..


The above lines - "My Fav"
Good one.. loved it da..

- KB
Sunshine http://itzkanna4u.blogspot.com/

bala said...

thanks ashu...ellam unga ashirvatham

bala said...

thanks varsha...u always like the last stanza :)

bala said...

@venkat i kno :)

bala said...

@anitha thanks

bala said...

@vish thanks a tonn ma'am

bala said...

@uma athe than :)

bala said...

@vinay thanks

bala said...

@kanna Mr.Sunshine :)