Thursday, May 13, 2010

How was ur day??

if u ask
hw was ur day?
well wat can i say
there was lots of sunshine
so din worry abt making hay

I Woke up with a smille
at the break of the dawn
Some distant birds
were chirpin my fav song
i felt like i was newly born

it was so much fun in tat luvly road
where i tried to bring a princess
by kissing a toad
with loads of joy
the day grew old

i saw a golden ship
raising from the horizon
as the moon touched me
by stretching its silver arms
wish i culd take this ecstasy all along

Every day may not be the same
there are few things tat i can really change
better not to waste tym findin reasons to blame
so if u ask,hw was ur day?
with a smile i will say
the tale of my life gettin better day by day

13 comments:

Unknown said...

i saw a golden ship
raising from the horizon
as the moon touched me
by stretching its silver arms
wish i culd take this ecstasy all along
this is fantastic..... josh varudu inda poem padicha....good one....

Unknown said...

hey really nice one man..very well said and meaningful :)

Saravanan said...

Wow!!Thats indeed optimistic!!

satish said...

bals..this is so much better than the sad ones....but cut down the short forms nd use full words...oderwise its very good nd has a positive tone to it..hoping to c bala the poet in a years time ...:P

boo_suki said...

better not to waste tym findin reasons to blame"" ... quoteddd oness Broo .. itssss great wrkk donee in little space .. thats how i wuldd put forthh ...
creations are madee excellentt byyy creators par excellencee ...
I bow down !!!!

Anonymous said...

Refreshing macha!! keep going.

Unknown said...

Nice one da ! u Rock !

Unknown said...

very nice one!!!!filled with positive energy!

மதுரக்காரி said...

If u ask me
'how was yr day?'
at once I'll say
without you it's like
a job widout hike,

a poem widout line
a party widout wine.. ;)

a dawn without light
& yes,
a love widout fight...

(but enna panrathu... neeyum kekura maathiri illa... naanum solra maathiri illa... :P)

Soundarya said...

oye Uma super...kalakite...comment eh super :)

மதுரக்காரி said...

nandri hai ka... :)
ellam ungalidam petra yaanai pal thaan mannaa ;)

Soundarya said...

ada paavi.

bala said...

thanks all