if u ask
hw was ur day?
well wat can i say
there was lots of sunshine
so din worry abt making hay
I Woke up with a smille
at the break of the dawn
Some distant birds
were chirpin my fav song
i felt like i was newly born
it was so much fun in tat luvly road
where i tried to bring a princess
by kissing a toad
with loads of joy
the day grew old
i saw a golden ship
raising from the horizon
as the moon touched me
by stretching its silver arms
wish i culd take this ecstasy all along
Every day may not be the same
there are few things tat i can really change
better not to waste tym findin reasons to blame
so if u ask,hw was ur day?
with a smile i will say
the tale of my life gettin better day by day
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i saw a golden ship
raising from the horizon
as the moon touched me
by stretching its silver arms
wish i culd take this ecstasy all along
this is fantastic..... josh varudu inda poem padicha....good one....
hey really nice one man..very well said and meaningful :)
Wow!!Thats indeed optimistic!!
bals..this is so much better than the sad ones....but cut down the short forms nd use full words...oderwise its very good nd has a positive tone to it..hoping to c bala the poet in a years time ...:P
better not to waste tym findin reasons to blame"" ... quoteddd oness Broo .. itssss great wrkk donee in little space .. thats how i wuldd put forthh ...
creations are madee excellentt byyy creators par excellencee ...
I bow down !!!!
Refreshing macha!! keep going.
Nice one da ! u Rock !
very nice one!!!!filled with positive energy!
If u ask me
'how was yr day?'
at once I'll say
without you it's like
a job widout hike,
a poem widout line
a party widout wine.. ;)
a dawn without light
& yes,
a love widout fight...
(but enna panrathu... neeyum kekura maathiri illa... naanum solra maathiri illa... :P)
oye Uma super...kalakite...comment eh super :)
nandri hai ka... :)
ellam ungalidam petra yaanai pal thaan mannaa ;)
ada paavi.
thanks all
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